Friday, April 13, 2012

Go Read

Well, I'm tossing in the old keyboard. Noir doesn't get any better than this!
http://www.shotgunhoney.net/2012/04/the-things-we-do-for-love-by-patti-abbott.html
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2 comments:

  1. Manuel RoyalApril 13, 2012 at 7:20 AM

    Not bad. Second person present tense should seldom be pulled out of the bag; but it works here.

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  2. sandra seamansApril 13, 2012 at 9:07 AM

    Short stories allow a writer to use what doesn't always work in novels. And yes, it does work wonderfully in Patti's story.

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